Saturday, 2 October 2010

My Number One

I know that I love you, and I know that you're "the one"
I know you're sorry, for all you've said and done,
But I can't get over it, you've pulled a fast one,
So I pick up the gun, and say goodbye to my "number one"...

2 comments:

  1. rhymes wicked, and can feel the emotion... sadness. i like it but i don't like it because how it makes me feel x

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  2. It is designed to make your feel that way. "Effective poetry" invokes certain emotions on the reader...

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