Saturday, 15 January 2011

Love the Way You Lie (Youtube Battle 2)

You shoulda known you'd lost me / as soon as you crossed me / shoulda thought twice before you bossed me / around / like you're wearing a crown / shoulda known what'd happen the day you cussed me / and now you're sporting a frown / you know me well enough to see I won't back down / now I'm leavin' you, going out of town / leave you looking like a clown /
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3 comments:

  1. the_shizz1017 January 2011 at 19:11

    been reading all your stuff n i think it's wicked. can like feel all the emotions n the beat to go with the rhyme as i read on. awesome. proper heart wrenchin too some of it.
    i've wrote a piece lately n was wondering if you're critique it if you don't mind. i'll email you it now in an attachment.
    cheers, n keep up the cool writing.

    the_shizz10@hotmail.co.uk

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  2. Karev Sparks17 January 2011 at 20:07

    Hey,

    Welcome to my blog and thanks for your comments. I have received the email and will read your piece now. I will email you back the critique. Please check your 'junk' folder.

    NS13CW

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  3. Karev Sparks17 January 2011 at 21:19

    Please note: I have replied to your email.

    NSCW

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